Questions on the barrister transcript
1.
In the transcript, pronouns are used frequently.
Names are a type of pronouns and this is the most common pronoun in this
extract. The barrister shows his authority in this situation, by calling the defendant
‘Mr Neil’ , this illustrates to the
audience the power he has over him because not only is it a formal way to address
someone it is said in a patronising way/ manipulating way. It shows that he isn’t familiar with the man
and calls him a name his friend or family wouldn’t call him on a daily basis,
but maybe someone would address him as if he was in trouble. He refers to him as this the whole way through
the extract continuing to manipulate him with the formality, even when the
conversation becomes more spontaneous.
2.
In the sections 5-15 it seems suited to a court
situation as the barrister holds his power by repeatedly questioning the defendant
and when necessary talking over him ‘is that right? What happened?...’ this
gives the barrister the upper hand in the conversation and has control over
what information he needs to find which is evident to the audience. Mr Neil
answers in a closed manner as far as possible and to the audience this means
that he is guilty, nervous or unable to remember- he often answers ‘no’ with a prior
uncomfortable pause, he also stumbles and becomes noticeably uncomfortable with
a lot of utterances and ‘er’ sounds during his conversation. The conversation
here is structured by the barrister however later on the questions get noticeably
spontaneous due to the nature of the situation, his questions start to adapt depending
on this answers and the next set of information he needs to gather.
Later on Mr Neil ‘laughs quietly’ when responding to the barristers
question where he raised his voice, this was clearly a natural response that wouldn’t
have been pre learnt, it may have come from his nerves of the fact that he is
so confident that it is rubbish. The barrister
still goes on to raise his voice to emphasise certain words which would have
been unplanned.
3.
From the beginning of the transcript it is clear
who has the control in the situation the barrister manipulates his language and
language techniques to belittle the defendant. He emphasises words which would
reach out to Mr Neil as it would bring him back into the conversation and
highlight the importance of what the is saying like when he suggests the ‘police’,
this picks out the fat that it is a serious matter and the potential consequences.
Mr Neil denies most of what he says and doesn’t give very detailed, truthful answers.
4.
To me nothing specifically stuck out to me for
being unusual or uncommon in a transcript.
Abbie, some very insightful comments and you weave in context very well. Check the definitions of proper noun and pronoun again. Use terminology to improve your analysis when considering questions, call them interrrogatives and identify other techniques within them that aid the speaker in achieving their purposes. Er is a filler or filler pause and it is not always a sign of discomfort so look closely at what else about the dialogue supports that conclusion - always be tentative and say 'seems' and 'may be because' as we cannot know. Once you have established something interesting (e.g. you noticed the questions become more spontaneous as the barrister responds to unforseen remarks by Mr N), delve into it more by doing some PEE analysis of a couple of examples and look at how they still move the barrister toward achieving his purpose and help to prevent Mr N from achieving his!
ReplyDeleteFilled pause - sorry for the typo
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