Wednesday, 14 October 2015

Commentary of same sex marriage article

Commentary for same sex marriage article
The two blogs speak of the controversial subject of same sex marriage. They both have very opposing views on the subject due to personal experiences, religion and other factors. I created these characters as I thought they had a clear insight to the topic of same sex marriage as one was a women who is in a heterosexual relationship and finally has the freedom to marry her fiancée and my other character, a middle aged man (around 35/40 year old) who was brought up with the religious views that same sex relationships are wrong and now wants the same views on this for his children.

In the first blog I open with a rhetorical question ‘Isn’t getting married supposed to be the happiest day of your life?’ this immediately makes you think of what your day would look like and consist of, it holds your attention as it gives you the time to bring yourself into the writing, it also makes you question just what the lady is going on to talk about, it’s clear that it is going to be on the subject of marriage but the aspect of this is unclear. My character then spoke about the facts that shocked her “definition of marriage” I used a fact to emphasis what the ‘Oxford University’ class same sex marriage as, the definition was surprising.


1 comment:

  1. Please finish this asap as I wanted to mark these today - you are aiming for 750 words.

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