Although both the texts are on the topic of Fairtrade, one is
about educating people on Fairtrade and the other highlights what is seen to be
as problems with Fairtade. The opposing views however
hold many similar techniques to capture the attention of the audience but also
have contrasting views and techniques. The action
aid webpage is aimed at teachers to use in their classes to teach students
about Fairtrade. The website is easy to find when you Google search “Fairtrade
resources”, they have a filter section where you can select the age of your
class and a key word for the information you want to find this is to make the
site easy to use and for people to come back and use it. The daily mail article
is also just as east to come across online, and contains facts, shock tactics
and opinions.
To start with both of the websites uses the opposite verbs
which displays their opposing views, the
action aid webpage used has the verb ‘helping’ at the top of the page and the
daily mirror has the word ‘fail’ in its headline which sets the tone of the
article and website. The word ‘helping’ suggests that they the service they are
providing is beneficial and having an impact on the country. However the daily
mail uses ‘fails’ to display that they believe that the Fairtrade system is not
helping the country and not making a positive impact.
Both of the websites feature young people and children in
their pictures of places like Ethiopia ,
this is because to other people they appear to be vulnerable and we, as a
country, instinctively have more sympathy for young people over adults. In the
daily mail article the picture of the young children struggling to work in the
heat is followed by a quote from them saying ‘they
had been working since the age of 10, or even earlier’ this gives the Fairtrade
business a bad name as its seen that they are using these young people to do
the hard work on a cheaper wage. The picture portraying this is dim and a very
dull picture; on the other hand, the picture on the aid action website is full
of green grass and bright colours- polar opposites! Another picture on this
sight is a picture of a young girl sat smiling while handling fruit captioned ‘meet
young Thia’ this suggests that the young children like doing what they are
doing to contribute to the FairTrade cycle.
Good intro - think about the wider context e.g. building a reputation for the site (more readers/clicks for The Dail Mail and more people to donate, volunteer or work for ActionAid)and look at how the language suits those purposes.
ReplyDeleteDon't forget to analyse the language when you link to graphology - to Britons, 10 seems a young age to work so the comparative phrase "even earlier" is shocking - this suits the tone of the Daily Mail which seeks out readers by sensationalising news soties - where else can this be seen?
Don't forget capital letters at the start of proper nouns like the Daily Mail, check when you can use 'sat' in standard English and when you should use 'sitting'; keep the register formal by avoiding comments like "polar opposites!" - you don't need them as the point was strong enough :) Good points of comparison - more terminology and subtle GRAPE to improve.